darkpaw
Medicine Cat Apprentice
FrostFurs - Secret Assistant
The true soul of the eye.
Posts: 41
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Post by darkpaw on Feb 23, 2011 17:03:55 GMT -5
Name: Darkpaw Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice Gender: Male Age: 15 moons Picture: None. Looks: Darkpaw has a pitch black pelt, he is a long-haired cat. Strangley, his eyes are a deep red colour that glimmer in the moonlight of the forest. Personality: He is very protective over his family, and will fight alot. Darkpaw is stubborn, and vicious at certain times. But at times, Darkpaw can be the most loving and kind cats in the whole clan. Nothing can hold back this cat. History: Unknown. Clan : NightClan Other: none.
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Post by Frostfur on Feb 23, 2011 17:05:00 GMT -5
You need more personality in it.
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Post by Frostfur on Feb 24, 2011 12:45:49 GMT -5
Thats more like it, i shall move it to the accepted bios, right away.
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